tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7832761310684911697.post2732873856563357781..comments2008-04-21T06:42:05.372-07:00Comments on Language Arts Secondary 1D: Announcement for all GROUP 8 's membersMs Dawn Chiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01117415015702850048noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7832761310684911697.post-4535985833164733082007-07-03T06:03:00.000-07:002007-07-03T06:03:00.000-07:00sorryms chia I will change it at once.sorry<BR/>ms chia <BR/>I will change it at once.brucezhanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12837540623259873962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7832761310684911697.post-28466634638362788672007-07-01T06:20:00.000-07:002007-07-01T06:20:00.000-07:00Now, group 8, I need you to suggest how we can imp...Now, group 8, I need you to suggest how we can improve on this sentence - I hope your people can post more and more posters.<BR/><BR/>I expect everyone in the group to give me one suggestion.Ms Dawn Chiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117415015702850048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7832761310684911697.post-61266278281100067092007-07-01T06:17:00.000-07:002007-07-01T06:17:00.000-07:00Bruce, please edit your posts for accuracy of lang...Bruce, please edit your posts for accuracy of language - spelling and grammar. <BR/>(1) Use 'All of you' instead of 'your'/'all of your'.<BR/>(2) 'post' instead of 'poster'<BR/>(3) 'I noticed that' instead of ' I saw that'<BR/>(4) 'the other groups' instead of 'other group'<BR/>(5) 'all the best to us' instead of 'for us' <BR/>(6) 'people' instead of 'prople' (you must check the dictionary if you are not sure!Don't let the lazy bug get you!)Ms Dawn Chiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117415015702850048noreply@blogger.com