Thursday, June 21, 2007

PLOT ANALYZER - VIVIAN (ISLAND OF THE BLUE DOLPHINS)

Paragraph: On the first day of spring I went down to Coral Cove with my new spear. I knew it was spring because that morning at dawn the sky was filled with flocks of darting birds. They were small and black and came only at this time of year. They came out of the south and stayed for two suns, hunting food in the ravines, and then flew off in one great flight towards the north.

Response - It is worth discussing because it is interesting as we never knew this types of birds will only stay for 2 suns during spring. We also never knew the darting birds are small and black and only came at spring.






3 comments:

Ms Dawn Chia said...

You should concentrate on the flow of the story. Key events in the story that you want to bring to your group's attention and to talk about it in depth.

KAILIN =D said...

I really didn't know that this kind of small black darting birds only stay for 2 days.

angeline=3 said...

Yep,we didn't know that small black darting birds only stay for 2 suns(2 days).Most of the birds stays at a place until the place is out of foods and the place is not suitable for them...