Wednesday, June 27, 2007

Island of the blue dolphin

Connector(Rebecca)

The tribe was just like a big family, they were very united, all of them decided to leave the village, not leaving anyone behind. They were just like a big family who will stay close together no matter what happened. Also, the warriors do not even gave up when they were forced backwards to the cliffs instead they fought until the end. This kind of spirit are very hard to find nowdays, the people nowdays always give up halfway when they feel that the journey is very diffcult and do not wish to carry on again. After that, they will feel very dishearten and upset. They have never cross their mind that that if they carry on till the end, they may success.

6 comments:

Ms Dawn Chia said...

I believe that you posted for Rebecca. I need both of you to edit the entry. There are many grammatical errors. Please check your work for grammatical and spelling errors.

ReBeCcA said...

Thank you,Yuan Ting!Your grammar still need improvement!Work towards better results.Thanks once again.^^

Jianting=P said...

If you say they were very united,then why did they left Ramo on the island and they board the ship theirselves?

mei peng said...

If the village leader is you...do u want the hope of all villages to perish??

yuanting said...

Thank you ms chia and rebecca reminder. I have edit the entry.

yuanting said...

If I was the leader, I defintely do not want the whole villages to perish.