Paragraph:
The Aleuts left on a sunless day.Out of the north deep waves rolled down upon the island.They broke against the rocks and roared into the caves,sending up white spray of water.Before night a storm would certainly strike.
Not long after dawn the Aleuts took down their skin tents and carried them to the beach.
Response:
I choose recommend this paragraph because this paragraph described the the sea vividly.It also can predict the next day have storm or not.The sentence ' Not long after dawn the Aleuts took down their skin tents and carried them to the beach. ' and 'The Aleuts left on a sunless day'.I think these sentence means the Aleuts wants to go to the sea before the storm and early because maybe they want to be early to their destination and also advoid storm that day.
Wednesday, June 27, 2007
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