Wednesday, June 27, 2007

Plot Analyzer_JinYang(chapter 4)

The Aleuts dropped the bales of otter. They drew knives from their belts and as our warriors rushed upon them the two lines surged back and forth along the beach. Men fell to the sand and rose to fight again. Others fell and did not get up. My father was one of these.
I choose this paragraph because this is the most exciting scene as the Aleuts draw their knives and fight with the warriors. They keep attack and defense which make them move back and forth. Some are die and some are injure.


Ms Dawn Chia said...

What can you say about the character of the Ghlas-at tribe?

brucezhang said...

I love this paragraph too!
Because I think this paragraph decided what will continue.If hr father did not die , there would not be so many things next.
This is really a important paragraph!!!