Tuesday, June 26, 2007

Plot Analyzer (Chapter 4)

Paragraph:It all happened so quickly that I could not tell one act from the other. But as I jumped to my feet and Ulape screamed and other cries sounded along the cliff , I saw a figure lying on the rocks. It was my father and blood was on his face. Slowly he got to his feet.



Response : It is worth discussing because this paragraph is full of actions and there are alot of things that we can discuss and write about.

4 comments:

Angeline said...

I agree that this paragraph is worth dicussing as this paragraph can show us many scenes.

KAILIN =D said...

This paragraph is full of scenes and so i agree that it is worth discussing.

PEARLYN(: said...

You can add "With their spears raised our men rushed down across the ledge. A puff of white smoke came from the deck of the ship. A loud noise echoed against the cliff." This paragraph describes how the tribes are getting ready to fight while the Aleuts are getting ready to get away using their ships .

NOELONGGGGGGG :D said...

i also agree that this paragraph is worth discussing as this paragraph indicates with so many action that was what happening in the war. WELL DONE :D